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Clothes is one of the most important thing in our daily life. They can help us more good looking or uglier when we wear clothes. Nowadays, many teenagers like wearing skirts and shorts (impolite clothes) but they say that it’s good. They feel comfortable and it’s very great to follow the latest fashion. But for me , I don’t like to follow the latest fashion. I’m not very keen on clothes but I only wear clothes which is suitable for me, It’s not important to follow the latest fashion or not, it’s allright! But if you look don’t suit on it, it’ll make you look worse than being good looking. In this modern life, modern sociaty, students, teachers or the other jobs often wear uniform on weekdays because they want to show the equal between everybody and on weekend, they can wear what ever they want to show their fashion. I think that, youngster clothes often have bright color and seem to be a little difficult to make them. Older clothes is much easier to make and they usually have simple dark color, I think so! I can’t image clothes in the future. I think it may be as same as now or a little bit different or more fashionable or something else... I don’t know. Let’s just wait till that day =) P/s: Đây là bài 'presentation' của mình về 'clothes', trong đây còn một số lỗi sai. Mong mọi người có thể dành chút thời gian để sửa lỗi sai và góp ý giúp mình. Mình xin cảm ơn :)

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In the fourth paragraph, 'sociaty' should be corrected to 'society'. Additionally, 'let's just wait till that day' can be changed to 'Let's just wait and see what the future holds'.

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For the third paragraph, it should be 'I'm not very keen on clothes, but I only wear clothes that are suitable for me.' Instead of 'allright', it should be 'alright'.

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In the second paragraph, it should be 'good looking' instead of 'more good looking'. Also, 'impolite clothes' can be changed to 'inappropriate clothing'.

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I would suggest revising the first sentence to 'Clothing is one of the most important things in our daily lives.' 'Clothes' should be used as a plural noun, so it should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

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